Angel of Death

Forbidden Violets By Angel of Death Chapter 2- We came to a stop at a small cabin that looked to be abandoned and old. The wood was eroding and it ...

I'm giving you a new nickname. Today you are deemed King Wow because after each paragraph I couldn't saying Wow! Your descriptions are getting better and better. I decided to ...

Can someone else critique this please?

Wow! I loved Twilight but you just bring another light to the dazzling Edward Cullen. You shed over him a shadowy veil of evil that is sometimes more refreshing than ...

A Fever I can't sweat So after reading the first installment "I said I'm tired and I'll read the rest later' but after wondering more about your lovely characters I ...

I apologize Jig. Really, I am entirely ashamed of myself. This story has been laying around here blind from my eyes and I did nothing about it. If you want, ...

2. Sam

This was so beautiful I can't even explain how magical this poem is. Wow. I didn't see any grammatical errors but I don't think you should change anything. It flowed ...

Hey Saint!! I really enjoyed this but it lacked some descriptions here and there. It was over too fast and I want more...oh well I guess I'll just have to ...

Hey Max!! This was beautiful and the title I really loved the title. Wow you made me cry because the emotions behind this were so real and I've been through ...

Artemis I could hear voices. One sounded like Jeremy Stork and the other one was not familiar. They were leaving and we were still sitting here. I tapped Sky on ...

Hey Wojovox, I've been seeing you around here a lot and you critique wholly and you pretty don't care about being nice....you tell the truth so I'm going to do ...

Light_Devil: You actually loved this? Really? Thanks! Well yeah the Angels names just happen to be Adam and Eve, yeah and I know that Adam and Eve were the first ...

Thanks for critiquing this clograbby. I know this is a little hard to follow but it'll be fixed up. This just started out as jumbled ideas but after rereading it ...

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